17
Mar
2015
Mar
2015
100 word challenge
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One couple was walking side by side on the road; lots of singles watched them curiously, talking something. Couples felt something strange but they thought it is just a feeling and just kept walking. As they turned the corner, they saw the people, who are holding a mike, camera, note and a pen. A person who was holding mike asked them, “What did you feel when you became couple?” a question that that couple will think this person is strange. So they asked it back, “why are you asking that?” people replied, “Because the couples are curious creature.
Mr K (Team 100wc)
March 23, 2015 at 4:17 pm (9 years ago)Hi Victoria & thank you for taking part in the 100wc! I liked the feeling of your writing this week – the mystery of the singles watching the couple – I think they must have felt quite unnerved by it!
Do remember words such as ‘the’ and ‘a’ – eg, ‘A person who was holding the mike’ and ‘What did you feel when you became a couple’. They’re called determiners and help the reader understand which noun you’re writing about.
Keep on writing!
Mr K 🙂